Mise-en-scene makeover: Learner response

1)
         WWW:
Good choice of music                                                                             EBI:
Well positioned, fixed camera                                                         Slightly closer shot (CU not MCU)
Effective use of make-up                                                                 -Show more detail
                                                                                                         Freeze frame at end
                                                                                                         -Hold shot for longer
                                                                                                         Lighting

2)

  www= the music went with the video very well

  www=Excellent make up on the attractive guy

  www=Good make up
  ebi=Too long

  www=Make up was pretty good and the music was also pretty good

  www=Very realistic make-up
 ebi=better quality, add text/audio and high key                                                                                         lighting                                                       

www=Good editing and music a long with make-up choice

 www=Editing was really good and I enjoyed the music

3)
WWW: The make-up my cousin did for me in the video looked really proffesional and had a very realistic look to it which was really positive. The music choice I chose was very fitting as it was an instrumental that just flowed well and wasn't distracting for the viewers. The position of my camera was also well placed and fixed allowing the audience to view the full thing well.
EBI: At the end of the video I should've included a freeze frame at the end or a picture of the finished thing as I wasn't able to put it in. I also should've used maybe my phone light as the video appeared very dark so you couldn't see all the details that were added onto my face clearly. I also used a medium close up instead of just a close up.

4)
By using the star persona mood board I used many horror related pictures like zombies, vampires, death, cemeteries etc so that it would be extremely clear as to what I would be focusing my make up on and it also gave me ideas on what I wanted to do in the end

5)
To improve my work for future videos I could use better lighting, editing techniques and brush up on my camera shot knowledge so that by the next time I will have met perfection or at least something close to it.

6)
I have learned that it's not just about turning the camera on to start recording and that instead you have to make sure you have all the correct things in place so that it will look a lot more professional and so that there will be fewer mistakes. Things like lighting and camera shots and freeze frames are also very integral and shouldn't be ignored.