Cinematography video feedback and learner response

1) Make sure your video is on YouTube and embedded on your blog. 
Done

2) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.
Grade: C+

3) Type up your feedback from fellow students.
WWW: Wide range of camera shots

EBI: Make it look more professional

WWW: You had good camera movement throughout the video

EBI: Include some dialogue so we can understand whats going on better

WWW: Good lighting used throughout the video

EBI: Use different camera movement techniques

WWW: Easy to understand the basis of your video

EBI: Use a more professional font for your text

WWW: Camera positioning was good especially on the low-angle shot as it made Kyle look very serious

EBI: More dialogue 

WWW: Good choice of music

EBI: Edit more transitions 

4) Now reflect on your work and write your own comments. Add three WWWs and three EBIs underneath the rest of your feedback.
WWW: Good range of camera shots

WWW: Music selection is fitting 

WWW: Camera movement is very good

EBI: The font I used for my video wasn't professional 

EBI: Try to make use of a tracking shot in the future as it can be effective 

EBI: Add dialogue to my video

5) Learner response: think about what you learned making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

I will make sure that when editing I will make my videos or any type of work I do look more professional. I also think adding an engaging narrative is critical as it engages the audience much more and is more creative than just adding a music track in the background. This way when I start my coursework in the summer my work will look much more polished and skilfully done. A camera shot I have learnt that I'll use more in the future is a tracking shot as it gives a really cinematic tone to the video especially when it's a tracking over the shoulder shot.