Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW:
-Some camera movement                                                             
Match on action
-Tracking shot+Whip pan
-Shot-reverse shot
-Follows brief
-Some good music at end

EBI:
-Opening shot too long->more editing
-Avoid titles
-Locations
-Dialogue quality
-More close ups
-More music/sound effects

Student comments summary
WWW: Camerawork, editing, acting
EBI: Sound and Location


2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your TV drama scene.
WWW:
-My camerawork was really good as I offered different angles and a variety of shots
-I managed to follow the brief very well sticking to all the instructions set
-My music used at the end was very efficient and matched the feeling of the scene

EBI:
-The dialogue should've been much more clear as the audience couldn't hear it as well as the should be able to. 
-I need to choose better locations as using an office in the school isn't where you want to be filming
-Make use of better props
3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?
I think I completed it quite effectively due to the fact that from one of my WWW's it was said that I perfectly followed the brief

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
I've learned that I must use more unique locations in my production and also when editing it is crucial to ensure no mistakes are made e.g sound transitions and not including any text on screen.

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything in your actual TV drama trailer? This could include narrative, character and script or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork and sound.
I am definitely going to change my narrative up as I i new ideas of where I want it to go, I feel as though the video from the task was maybe slightly rushed so I want to think it out much more. Different characters with different motives will need to be used and of course my sound must be worked on much more.