Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the six categories. 
WWW:
Good opening
Good slides/presentation-images-visual
Terminology-Audience media lang, genre
Some theory
Accurate slides

EBI:
Reading too much + too fast 
Look at audience
Industry- too early

1)3
2)3
3)4
4)3
5)3
6)2
Total=18

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own coursework concept and presentation as a whole.
WWW- I believe that my presentation had an excellent opening as I managed to capture the audiences attention right from the first slide. In addition, my slides were all very clear and well constructed. The images were very aesthetically pleasing as I perfectly picked out the images that would best fit my presentation. I also didn't use much writing in my slides which was also good as ignite presentations are about images. My strongest aspect was the Language terminology and theory. My peers gave me very high marks mainly consisting of 4's and 5's.

EBI- 
For me, I think I need to slow down a bit when talking so that the audience can clearly understand what I'm trying to say. Another thing I need to work on is making eye contact wit the audience as a lot of the time I found myself with my head down just reading directly from the flashcards

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your narrative offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Does it fit the genre you are aiming for? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

My ignite presentation will lead into my actual coursework as it'll help me gain a better understanding of what I want to achieve for my coursework. One of the main things my ignite presentation taught me is that I need to have a better understanding of my narrative as I didn't fully go into detail what it is about, not making it clear enough. Therefore I'll have to think more carefully of what I want my plot to be and I'll have to also make changes to my statement of intent. I definitely do agree that it is appropriate for the audience as I don't breach any of the watershed rule by using a range of censoring techniques, one of which being low-key lighting. I am planning to add more terminology , language as well as theory to my statement of intent after listening to everybody else's presentations as they talk about different aspects of the crime genre hadn't thought of, therefore allowing me to improve on my work.